Pietro is a project manager at a major food and beverage company. Last
Wednesday Pietro emailed his colleague Ray in the United States requesting him
to update the Key Progress Report. Pietro cannot complete the full report
without this information and needs a reply ASAP. His colleague hasn't responded
yet and Pietro is not sure if the email even got to him. What can Pietro do?
It is likely that you have at some time found yourself in a similar situation; you need to write an email to remind someone who has not answered you that they need to do something. The language you should use to write a polite reminder email should ideally be respectful and assertive.
Be sure to
· specify the response
you want, and to include any call to action you expect, such as a phone call or
follow-up appointment.
· Consider who you are writing to: is your colleague American or British?
Generally Americans prefer direct language, while the British prefer diplomatic
language (see article British Communication Styles).
· Include or forward the original
email to the original recipient
and write a suitable subject line: e.g. Polite Reminder: Key Progress
Report feedback needed / Please provide your feedback etc.
· Write a soft reminder implicit that you understand that they might be busy. Here
you don’t actively demand that they do something immediately, you just
ask them when they will be able to do it.
In the section below are some examples, varying
in tone and formality, which you can use as a template
Hello Ray,
Have you had time to look into this? Can you let me know when you will
be able to do it?
Kind Regards,
Pietro
Hello Ray
I’m just emailing to check you got the Key Progress Report I sent you on
the 7th of May. I have to complete the report for the Senior Users and I can’t
do that until I receive your feedback. Can you please tell me when you'll be
able to look at it for me?
Kind regards,
Pietro
Dear Ray,
I am following up on the email I sent on May 7th regarding your feedback
for the the
Key Progress Report. I need to send the complete report to the Senior
Users by Thursday and would ask you to please reply, confirming the details of
the assignment. You can also reach me at 355 631 4671 should you need any help.
Respectfully yours,
Pietro
Dear Ray,
This is with regards to the Key Progress Report email sent 7th May. We have still not received a response from
you. Please send us the desired data by Monday EOD.
Please
let us know if you require any assistance from our end.
Regards,
Pietro
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